Post by ROCKIE ! on Jun 16, 2011 0:41:15 GMT -6
Name: Graypaw
Age: 10 moons old
Gender: Tom
Clan: ShadowClan
Rank: Apprentice
Mentor:
Love Interest: -- will develop a crush on Brightpaw
Kin:
- Dawnpaw (sister, might be played by another person)
- Stripedpaw (sister, might be played by another character)
- Mosspelt (father, NPC)
- Cinderfur (mother, NPC)
Description:Graypaw is a tall, slim apprentice. He has gray fur, and in daylight, it turns into a grayish orange color. He has amber eyes, and his gaze is soft. His whiskers are long, and thin. Graypaw has a long, thin tail. His fur is smooth and short. He has a few stripes on his fur, which are a darker gray, but they usually just blend in with the rest of his gray fur. Though he is slim, he is strong, and has sharp claws. Graypaw has white paws, however, and the tip of his tail is also white, unlike the rest of his fur. Graypaw also has a streak of white fur on his belly, up to his neck.
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Personality:Graypaw is rather soft for a ShadowClan apprentice. He is sensitive, and can be offended easily. Graypaw usually speaks calmly, which annoys a few of the warriors. Because he is easily offended, he will become a little scared and sad, and doesn't trust some cats in his Clan. He trusts easily at first, until you tell him something terrible--like you never liked him, and were never his friend, and you'll lose his trust, and he'll feel upset for a couple of days. Graypaw may also be described as shy, because he usually doesn't talk too loudly, and is afraid around other cats. Even though he's brave, he's afraid of talking to other cats--especially she-cats. Graypaw doesn't make friends easily, however, and he doesn't know why. He usually is too shy to talk to anybody, which causes him to be quiet and not make any friends. He's quite a strong cat, however. Graypaw can fight well, and hunt well, too. He's quick, but not as quick as a WindClan cat. Graypaw is brave, and will fight for his Clan, or any cat he loves. Graypaw isn't afraid to risk his life to save a friend of his. He will try to jump in front of them and tell the attacker to hit him instead, and not the cat behind him. Graypaw is very sweet, and usually will be kind to any cat he meets.
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History:
Graykit was born from a litter of three. Graykit was born with two sisters, Dawnkit and Stripedkit. Dawnkit was quite a tough kit, and usually would tell him to toughen up. Mosspelt, their father, was a great hunter. Cinderfur, their mother, was a good hunter as well. Dawnkit became quite a tough she-cat, and fought with a lot of other kits. Stripedkit soon became tough as well, and the two sisters constantly fought. They told Graykit that he needed to toughen up. He was a quiet kit, and usually was left alone. Mosspelt told Graykit that he needed to try to toughen up, and Cinderfur told him the same. But Graykit didn't want to change.
"Graypaw, you need to toughen up!" Dawnpaw told him angrily. It was a few moons after they had became apprentices. She scraped him across the muzzle. "Your my sister!" he called out. He wouldn't hit her back. He didn't want to. "So?" Graypaw was quiet for a couple of moments. Cinderfur told him that he did need to toughen up, and Mosspelt nodded. "Your sister is right." they told him. Stripedpaw told him that he needed to be tough a little bit later. But Graypaw didn't want to change. He didn't want to toughen up. He didn't like Dawnpaw. His sister was becoming a rude she-cat, and she fought with most cats in the Clan a lot. She scraped him across the muzzle a few times, too. "Graypaw, enough. You're too soft for a ShadowClan cat!" she shouted at him, then scraped him across the muzzle once more. Graypaw ran away, and hid for a couple of moments before coming out. He padded up to Dawnpelt, unsheathed his claws, and scraped her across her muzzle. "Go away!" he shouted angrily, and his sister let out a laugh. "Graypaw, you're a terrible fighter!" she hissed, before she padded away. Graypaw sighed. He didn't want to change. He was constantly reminded by Stripedpaw to toughen up. He made himself a promise. He told himself that he would risk his life to protect a cat he loved. He told himself that he wouldn't be afraid. Graypaw promised himself that he would jump in front of a cat he loved, and protect him or her with his life.
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