Post by Yoko on May 21, 2011 15:30:24 GMT -6
I need some reviews and feedbacks on your feelings about an Warriors Minigame. Please note that the entire mini game will not be spoken in "you did such and such". This is just the first version of an intro.
The blackest, stormiest night of leaf-green struck the forest that night. As your denmates tucked tight and tried to sleep through the storm, rain pounded the ground outside, and lightning illuminated the forest. As you hunched your back up toward the noise outside, a rather unnatural sound tickled your ear. A soft breath of a voice, a stranger’s, too gentle to be heard by the ear alone, rather it touched your mind and heart awoke you. Your eyes narrowed at first, expecting it to be a denmate needing to share a secret, but your eyes widened in horror as youl ooked upon a rather large tabby tom who was clearly not of your Clan.
“Intruder!” you half hissed-half yowled, but the air was still and no cat stirred. With a jolt you realized that the rain and thunder have stopped. Outside, the water droplets hang in the air, like ice crystals, and the sky was frozen in the blank whiteness of frozen lightning.
“Heeeeeelp me!” Tigertail moaned, a deep and chilling sound.
“What-“
“Justice…” The tabby muttered. “Truth…Justice…Truth…Justice”
Your eyes absorbed more of his figure, a disfigured mass of tiger-like fur. His neck jutting at an awkward angle, covered in clawmarks and scratches, fur tattered. What happened to this cat? Why was he starting to look vaguely familiar?
“Who are you?”
“TIGERTAIL!” the spirit roared in fury.
This was clearly not a living cat…and yet it was mad! Was there madness in StarClan?
“Bring me Justice. Bring the Truth. Or suffer my wrath!”
Darkness! You blinked and the white light was gone. The rain pounded and the thunder boomed. Dazed and befuddled, you wonder if it was all a dream. And yet, you were standing exactly in the spot that you first confronted the angry spirit. It had mentioned a curse…what would it do? And so began your investigation into the mystery of Tigertail. If not to save the tortured soul, then perhaps of your own curiosity, or perhaps to avoid dead cat’s curse. One thing is certain, the path you are about to walk is not a safe one.
So for those of you who haven't heard. Yoko is working on a mystery mini game for the site ^_^. No, not Mafia, but we can play that again if anyone's up to it.
The game works in mini-rp form, where you play one or two charries who have been visited by the ghost of Tigertail. One would think that Tigertail's death would only pertain to ThunderClan, since that is where he was born and raised his entire life, however, as your characters delve in they will come to realize that Tigertail had a rather complex relationship with each and every Clan. And although solving the mystery of Tigertail's death is the main objective, there are many other solvable mysteries within the game. So leave no rock unturned, adventurers.
Because Tigertail does not actually exist on NIF, and because some NPC suspects take high positions, this game is to be considered an alternate NIF Universe, in which your charries may exist so long as it does not conflict with the structure of the minigame. They can even be the characters you decide to play as.
Ex: I could play Patchpaw, or I could make a new character specifically for the mini-game.
Also, characters can be in any of the four Clans. The true murderer will only be in one though, choose carefully. And they can be in any rank, but obviously kits are going to have seriously limited movement xD So watch that as well.
The real question that I need to ask you all about, is the moving forward of the game. What if, by participating in certain threads, you could unlock secret areas, or clues, for the minigame. Would that be a nice treat for our dedicated rp'ers who make open threads and patrol posts?
For example: If you post in a patrol thread in RiverClan, you could recieve a password to a secret area of minigame RiverClan, or a vital clue about which RiverClan suspect is most likely responsible for Tigertail's death.
So what do you all think? Suggestions? Critique?
The blackest, stormiest night of leaf-green struck the forest that night. As your denmates tucked tight and tried to sleep through the storm, rain pounded the ground outside, and lightning illuminated the forest. As you hunched your back up toward the noise outside, a rather unnatural sound tickled your ear. A soft breath of a voice, a stranger’s, too gentle to be heard by the ear alone, rather it touched your mind and heart awoke you. Your eyes narrowed at first, expecting it to be a denmate needing to share a secret, but your eyes widened in horror as youl ooked upon a rather large tabby tom who was clearly not of your Clan.
“Intruder!” you half hissed-half yowled, but the air was still and no cat stirred. With a jolt you realized that the rain and thunder have stopped. Outside, the water droplets hang in the air, like ice crystals, and the sky was frozen in the blank whiteness of frozen lightning.
“Heeeeeelp me!” Tigertail moaned, a deep and chilling sound.
“What-“
“Justice…” The tabby muttered. “Truth…Justice…Truth…Justice”
Your eyes absorbed more of his figure, a disfigured mass of tiger-like fur. His neck jutting at an awkward angle, covered in clawmarks and scratches, fur tattered. What happened to this cat? Why was he starting to look vaguely familiar?
“Who are you?”
“TIGERTAIL!” the spirit roared in fury.
This was clearly not a living cat…and yet it was mad! Was there madness in StarClan?
“Bring me Justice. Bring the Truth. Or suffer my wrath!”
Darkness! You blinked and the white light was gone. The rain pounded and the thunder boomed. Dazed and befuddled, you wonder if it was all a dream. And yet, you were standing exactly in the spot that you first confronted the angry spirit. It had mentioned a curse…what would it do? And so began your investigation into the mystery of Tigertail. If not to save the tortured soul, then perhaps of your own curiosity, or perhaps to avoid dead cat’s curse. One thing is certain, the path you are about to walk is not a safe one.
So for those of you who haven't heard. Yoko is working on a mystery mini game for the site ^_^. No, not Mafia, but we can play that again if anyone's up to it.
The game works in mini-rp form, where you play one or two charries who have been visited by the ghost of Tigertail. One would think that Tigertail's death would only pertain to ThunderClan, since that is where he was born and raised his entire life, however, as your characters delve in they will come to realize that Tigertail had a rather complex relationship with each and every Clan. And although solving the mystery of Tigertail's death is the main objective, there are many other solvable mysteries within the game. So leave no rock unturned, adventurers.
Because Tigertail does not actually exist on NIF, and because some NPC suspects take high positions, this game is to be considered an alternate NIF Universe, in which your charries may exist so long as it does not conflict with the structure of the minigame. They can even be the characters you decide to play as.
Ex: I could play Patchpaw, or I could make a new character specifically for the mini-game.
Also, characters can be in any of the four Clans. The true murderer will only be in one though, choose carefully. And they can be in any rank, but obviously kits are going to have seriously limited movement xD So watch that as well.
The real question that I need to ask you all about, is the moving forward of the game. What if, by participating in certain threads, you could unlock secret areas, or clues, for the minigame. Would that be a nice treat for our dedicated rp'ers who make open threads and patrol posts?
For example: If you post in a patrol thread in RiverClan, you could recieve a password to a secret area of minigame RiverClan, or a vital clue about which RiverClan suspect is most likely responsible for Tigertail's death.
So what do you all think? Suggestions? Critique?
