Post by Yoko on Oct 10, 2010 20:46:19 GMT -6
Fanfic based off of two songs. I own neither warriors nor Eminem's song "Kim". My warning for ANYONE who tries to look that song up. It is graphic. It is disturbing. And it's written about the rapper's ex-wife. Not that he really did any of this. He's just expressing himself.
Hawkflight stood with his tail curled around his small gray kit. Despite the pouring rain and crashing thunder, somehow the two of them crouched together beneath one of the sparse bushes of the moor was peaceful. The cold tom looked down at his snoozing daughter with an oozing affection.
"Aww look at Daddy's little kit. Who's Daddy's little Kit? I'm so proud of you."
In the corner, a choked sob escaped the cowering figure just outside the flimsy bush. It was a soaked and puny creature, drenched with rain and wretching like it was being eaten. The pitiful sound earned the creature a look of disgust and hatred.
"SHUT UP! BEFORE I BEAT THE DUNG OUT OF YOU!"
A flash of lightning revealed Sandtail, eyes wide and pelt bristling despite the cold rain weighing on her fur. She coughed another sob.
"DON'T MAKE ME WAKE THIS KIT, SHE DOESN'T NEED TO SEE WHAT I'M ABOUT TO DO!"
Hawkflight uncoiled from around the sleeping four moon old kitten. She was apparently a heavy sleeper. For the best really...Her father, the dusky tabby tom, stormed out into the rain towards the rapidly shrinking and disheveled form of his mate.
Over the thunder, Hawkflight roared, "QUIT CRYING! WHY DO YOU MAKE ME SHOUT AT YOU?! WHAT'S WRONG, SANDTAIL? AM I TOO LOUD FOR YOU?!"
Sandtail backed away so fast that she slipped in a puddle, looking up with fearful eyes. He had yet to touch her, but there was such fury in his eyes. She could feel herself in danger.
"HOW COULD YOU LEAVE ME FOR HIM?! AT FIRST I WAS LIKE, FINE MOVE ON BUT NOT FOR HIM TO TAKE MY PLACE AS A FATHER! ARE YOU OUT OF YOU'RE MIND?! YOU, THOSE KITS, AND THIS PLACE OF OURS ARE MINE! HOW COULD YOU LET HIM SLEEP HERE?! AT OUR SPOT?!"
The cream queen flinched as if his words were claws. She shrank and ducked and backed with every pawstep he took towards her.
"He's not so good now is he? Don't find him attractive anymore do you?" Hawkflight mewed with a little laugh.
Sandflight shut her eyes and turned away.
"LOOK AT YOUR NEW MATE SANDTAIL!"
"NO!" she screamed.
"I SAID LOOK AT HIM!"
"You're out of your mind..." she whispered, eyes wide as she looked up at him, still fallen on her side in the puddle. "You'll never get away with this."
"SHUT UP!" He yowled in her face. "We're going for a walk."
"NO! I mean-We can't leave Violetkit out here alone! What if she wakes up?" Sandtail sobbed feebly, trying to excuse herself.
"We'll be right back!" Hawkflight mewed, grabbing her by the neck-scruff.
Well I will, you'll be in a ditch!
He half dragged her alongside him. Sandtail, so stunned from the events of the night bumbled along. She was no match for him and she knew it. Her only hope was for someone to come and save her. But who would even know to look? It was the middle of the night!
"I can't believe this! How could you do this to us?! Is it revenge for me for me mating with that other she-cat?! I was young, WE were young. And we said we were going to start from scratch and you go and do THIS?! That's MESSED up!"
"I'm sorry...I LOVE YOU" she squealed.
My brain is racing! It pounds so much!
She started to deviate from his path.
"WHAT ARE YOU DOING?! WE'RE NOT GOING BACK TO CAMP! WHAT YOU WANT EVERYONE TO KNOW OUR BUSINESS?! LIKE WHAT YOU DID TO SANDKIT?!"
"I'm sorry! I'm sorry!" she whined tears indistinguishable from the rain.
"YOU THINK THIS A JOKE?! THERE'S A FOUR MOON OLD IN THE OLD BADGER SET WITH A SLIT THROAT!"
"WHAT?!" Sandtail wailed, lost in the thunder.
"HAHA! YOU THINK I'M JOKING?!" Hawkflight cackled, eyes wide, blank, unseeing. He was clearly out of his mind. His steps wobbled but his pelt was pressed against his former mate's side. If Sandtail moved the wrong way he would bite her.
"You loved him didn't you?" Hawkflight asked quietly, his crazy smile fading, replaced with an agonized frown.
"No! No! No! No" Sandtail mewed quickly.
"LIAR! " Hawkflight yelled, slapping her with his forepaw.
"Quiet out there!" shouted an annoyed warrior, apparently out to make dirt. He walked by without a glance back.
"BITE ME!" Hawkflight snapped.
Miststorm turned and hissed at the tabby warrior but went back to camp all the same. Too tired for serious conflict. Too bad for Sandtail.... She cowered, refusing to move any further, her face buried in her paws.
"Sandtail! SANDTAIL!" Hawkflight shrieked in her ear. "Why don't you like me? You think I'm ugly, don't you?"
"Noooooooooo," Sandtail moaned, mentally breaking down.
"Yes you do. You think I'm ugly!" Hawkflight declared.
Sandtail tried to nuzzle him, hoping if she could reassure him he'd leave her. Or at least let them go back to camp. Hawkflight jumped back, utterly repulsed.
"GET AWAY FROM YOU! DON'T TOUCH ME! NEVER TOUCH ME AGAIN! I HATE YOU! I HATE YOU!.....I SWEAR TO StarClan I HATE YOU YOU.......Oh StarClan....Sandtail, I Love You!"
"I'm sorry.....I'm sorry! Hawky, don't do this! Don't!"
"How could you do this to me?" Hawkflight mewed shaking his head.
"I don't know..."
"HOW COULD YOU DO THIS TO ME?!" Hawkflight hissed, striking her muzzle again.
They walked for sometime in silence, soaked to their bones. Both were aching, pained, an emotional tornado together, tearing each other apart with their presence. Sandtail could hardly move. Tired and stunned as she was, she could guess what he was going to do with her. She stopped dead in her tracks as it reality crashed her full on. She quivered, eyes wide. What she was staring at...A dip in the moor.
"Come on we're here!"
"I-i-i can't I'm so tired....I'm scared."
"I SAID COME HERE!" Hawkflight roared, grabbed her by the neck and dragged her forward.
"LET GO OF MY FUR! I'm sorry! I'm sorry! We can go! We can take Violetkit and go aw-"
"FORGET YOU! YOU DID THIS TO US! YOU DID IT! IT'S YOUR FAULT!"
I'm losing my mind! I must be! How can this be happening? Am I really going to do this?! It's all her fault! She deserves it! .....She's the mother of my kits! She's worse than two-leg trash!
Hawkflight released her throat and smiled suddenly, "Hey remember when we were apprentices and we snuck out to hunt and you ate so much you threw up all over Goldenfur?"
"Yes!" Sandtail mewed, trying to smile through her pain. Surely he was coming to his senses. He wouldn't kill her.
"That was funny wasn't it?" he went on with a pitiful laugh.
"Yes!" Sandtail agreed, nodding desperately.
"THAT WAS FUNNY WASN'T IT?!"
"YES!"
"It all makes sense now doesn't it?" Hawkflight mewed with those wild eyes. "See you and your new mate get into a fight! One of you unsheathes your claws, and in the struggle he gets his throat sliced. His son wakes up, you panic and suddenly the kit is limp as dead mice. Then you panic and decide to take your own life."
"Oh Great StarClan!" Sandtail wailed into the howling wind. "OH StarClan! WHY?!!!"
Hawkflight only turned away and shook his head. "I should have known something was wrong....when you started to act weird. We could have been together forever- What the Dung?! Where are you going?! GET BACK HERE!"
Sandtail ran full as fast as her soaked and exhausted body would allow. Of course, she had become a plump and well cared for queen. She was no match for her fit and swift mate.
"THERE'S NOWHERE YOU CAN GO SANDTAIL! IT'S JUST US! NOBODY ELSE! YOU'RE ONLY MAKING THIS HARDER ON YOURSELF![/i] [/color]GOTCHA! >3"
He tackled her, crouched onto her back, claws digging into her back.
"Go ahead yell! Here I'll scream with you. SOMEBODY HEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEELP! Don't you get it? No one can hear you! Now shut up and get what's coming to you!"
He stabbed both claws into her neck. A sick gurgling sound erupted from his former mate's throat.
"YOU WERE SUPPOSED TO LOVE ME!"
Gurgle. spluttttter........
"NOW BLEED! QUEEN BLEED!"
........Cough.....
"GO ON NOW [/i] BLEED!"
....Gasps.......
BLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEED!!!!!!!!!!!!! [/i]"
He felt her body convulse, her last breath leave. Her eyes half-closed.Hawkflight pulled himself off her, breathing hard. He felt cold now. Heartless. He grabbed her scruff and dragged her to the ditch, dropping her in.
PART ONE: SANDTAIL
Hawkflight stood with his tail curled around his small gray kit. Despite the pouring rain and crashing thunder, somehow the two of them crouched together beneath one of the sparse bushes of the moor was peaceful. The cold tom looked down at his snoozing daughter with an oozing affection.
"Aww look at Daddy's little kit. Who's Daddy's little Kit? I'm so proud of you."
In the corner, a choked sob escaped the cowering figure just outside the flimsy bush. It was a soaked and puny creature, drenched with rain and wretching like it was being eaten. The pitiful sound earned the creature a look of disgust and hatred.
"SHUT UP! BEFORE I BEAT THE DUNG OUT OF YOU!"
A flash of lightning revealed Sandtail, eyes wide and pelt bristling despite the cold rain weighing on her fur. She coughed another sob.
"DON'T MAKE ME WAKE THIS KIT, SHE DOESN'T NEED TO SEE WHAT I'M ABOUT TO DO!"
Hawkflight uncoiled from around the sleeping four moon old kitten. She was apparently a heavy sleeper. For the best really...Her father, the dusky tabby tom, stormed out into the rain towards the rapidly shrinking and disheveled form of his mate.
Over the thunder, Hawkflight roared, "QUIT CRYING! WHY DO YOU MAKE ME SHOUT AT YOU?! WHAT'S WRONG, SANDTAIL? AM I TOO LOUD FOR YOU?!"
Sandtail backed away so fast that she slipped in a puddle, looking up with fearful eyes. He had yet to touch her, but there was such fury in his eyes. She could feel herself in danger.
"HOW COULD YOU LEAVE ME FOR HIM?! AT FIRST I WAS LIKE, FINE MOVE ON BUT NOT FOR HIM TO TAKE MY PLACE AS A FATHER! ARE YOU OUT OF YOU'RE MIND?! YOU, THOSE KITS, AND THIS PLACE OF OURS ARE MINE! HOW COULD YOU LET HIM SLEEP HERE?! AT OUR SPOT?!"
The cream queen flinched as if his words were claws. She shrank and ducked and backed with every pawstep he took towards her.
"He's not so good now is he? Don't find him attractive anymore do you?" Hawkflight mewed with a little laugh.
Sandflight shut her eyes and turned away.
"LOOK AT YOUR NEW MATE SANDTAIL!"
"NO!" she screamed.
"I SAID LOOK AT HIM!"
"You're out of your mind..." she whispered, eyes wide as she looked up at him, still fallen on her side in the puddle. "You'll never get away with this."
"SHUT UP!" He yowled in her face. "We're going for a walk."
"NO! I mean-We can't leave Violetkit out here alone! What if she wakes up?" Sandtail sobbed feebly, trying to excuse herself.
"We'll be right back!" Hawkflight mewed, grabbing her by the neck-scruff.
Well I will, you'll be in a ditch!
He half dragged her alongside him. Sandtail, so stunned from the events of the night bumbled along. She was no match for him and she knew it. Her only hope was for someone to come and save her. But who would even know to look? It was the middle of the night!
"I can't believe this! How could you do this to us?! Is it revenge for me for me mating with that other she-cat?! I was young, WE were young. And we said we were going to start from scratch and you go and do THIS?! That's MESSED up!"
"I'm sorry...I LOVE YOU" she squealed.
My brain is racing! It pounds so much!
She started to deviate from his path.
"WHAT ARE YOU DOING?! WE'RE NOT GOING BACK TO CAMP! WHAT YOU WANT EVERYONE TO KNOW OUR BUSINESS?! LIKE WHAT YOU DID TO SANDKIT?!"
"I'm sorry! I'm sorry!" she whined tears indistinguishable from the rain.
"YOU THINK THIS A JOKE?! THERE'S A FOUR MOON OLD IN THE OLD BADGER SET WITH A SLIT THROAT!"
"WHAT?!" Sandtail wailed, lost in the thunder.
"HAHA! YOU THINK I'M JOKING?!" Hawkflight cackled, eyes wide, blank, unseeing. He was clearly out of his mind. His steps wobbled but his pelt was pressed against his former mate's side. If Sandtail moved the wrong way he would bite her.
"You loved him didn't you?" Hawkflight asked quietly, his crazy smile fading, replaced with an agonized frown.
"No! No! No! No" Sandtail mewed quickly.
"LIAR! " Hawkflight yelled, slapping her with his forepaw.
"Quiet out there!" shouted an annoyed warrior, apparently out to make dirt. He walked by without a glance back.
"BITE ME!" Hawkflight snapped.
Miststorm turned and hissed at the tabby warrior but went back to camp all the same. Too tired for serious conflict. Too bad for Sandtail.... She cowered, refusing to move any further, her face buried in her paws.
"Sandtail! SANDTAIL!" Hawkflight shrieked in her ear. "Why don't you like me? You think I'm ugly, don't you?"
"Noooooooooo," Sandtail moaned, mentally breaking down.
"Yes you do. You think I'm ugly!" Hawkflight declared.
Sandtail tried to nuzzle him, hoping if she could reassure him he'd leave her. Or at least let them go back to camp. Hawkflight jumped back, utterly repulsed.
"GET AWAY FROM YOU! DON'T TOUCH ME! NEVER TOUCH ME AGAIN! I HATE YOU! I HATE YOU!.....I SWEAR TO StarClan I HATE YOU YOU.......Oh StarClan....Sandtail, I Love You!"
"I'm sorry.....I'm sorry! Hawky, don't do this! Don't!"
"How could you do this to me?" Hawkflight mewed shaking his head.
"I don't know..."
"HOW COULD YOU DO THIS TO ME?!" Hawkflight hissed, striking her muzzle again.
They walked for sometime in silence, soaked to their bones. Both were aching, pained, an emotional tornado together, tearing each other apart with their presence. Sandtail could hardly move. Tired and stunned as she was, she could guess what he was going to do with her. She stopped dead in her tracks as it reality crashed her full on. She quivered, eyes wide. What she was staring at...A dip in the moor.
"Come on we're here!"
"I-i-i can't I'm so tired....I'm scared."
"I SAID COME HERE!" Hawkflight roared, grabbed her by the neck and dragged her forward.
"LET GO OF MY FUR! I'm sorry! I'm sorry! We can go! We can take Violetkit and go aw-"
"FORGET YOU! YOU DID THIS TO US! YOU DID IT! IT'S YOUR FAULT!"
I'm losing my mind! I must be! How can this be happening? Am I really going to do this?! It's all her fault! She deserves it! .....She's the mother of my kits! She's worse than two-leg trash!
Hawkflight released her throat and smiled suddenly, "Hey remember when we were apprentices and we snuck out to hunt and you ate so much you threw up all over Goldenfur?"
"Yes!" Sandtail mewed, trying to smile through her pain. Surely he was coming to his senses. He wouldn't kill her.
"That was funny wasn't it?" he went on with a pitiful laugh.
"Yes!" Sandtail agreed, nodding desperately.
"THAT WAS FUNNY WASN'T IT?!"
"YES!"
"It all makes sense now doesn't it?" Hawkflight mewed with those wild eyes. "See you and your new mate get into a fight! One of you unsheathes your claws, and in the struggle he gets his throat sliced. His son wakes up, you panic and suddenly the kit is limp as dead mice. Then you panic and decide to take your own life."
"Oh Great StarClan!" Sandtail wailed into the howling wind. "OH StarClan! WHY?!!!"
Hawkflight only turned away and shook his head. "I should have known something was wrong....when you started to act weird. We could have been together forever- What the Dung?! Where are you going?! GET BACK HERE!"
Sandtail ran full as fast as her soaked and exhausted body would allow. Of course, she had become a plump and well cared for queen. She was no match for her fit and swift mate.
"THERE'S NOWHERE YOU CAN GO SANDTAIL! IT'S JUST US! NOBODY ELSE! YOU'RE ONLY MAKING THIS HARDER ON YOURSELF![/i] [/color]GOTCHA! >3"
He tackled her, crouched onto her back, claws digging into her back.
"Go ahead yell! Here I'll scream with you. SOMEBODY HEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEELP! Don't you get it? No one can hear you! Now shut up and get what's coming to you!"
He stabbed both claws into her neck. A sick gurgling sound erupted from his former mate's throat.
"YOU WERE SUPPOSED TO LOVE ME!"
Gurgle. spluttttter........
"NOW BLEED! QUEEN BLEED!"
........Cough.....
"GO ON NOW [/i] BLEED!"
....Gasps.......
BLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEED!!!!!!!!!!!!! [/i]"
He felt her body convulse, her last breath leave. Her eyes half-closed.Hawkflight pulled himself off her, breathing hard. He felt cold now. Heartless. He grabbed her scruff and dragged her to the ditch, dropping her in.
