Post by nightstorm on Jan 23, 2010 14:28:36 GMT -6
((This is a fanfic I started when I was bored one day. I've always wondered three things:
Thus, I wrote this story, to be posted every so often in segments. Enjoy!))
An agonized wail rang through the still night air. A slender black queen raised her head again, and let out another grief-stricken cry. Beside her lay two small bundles. One barely moved, while the other never had. The queen nosed her kits, her vision clouded with pain and sorrow, as she nudged the little she-kit. The dark tabby kit didn’t respond, her flanks not even rising or falling. The she-cat, finally giving up, turned to the other, a tom-kit, and black like her. His mouth opened in a pitiful hunger cry, and the queen’s eyes softened. She nudged the little kit to her belly, where he latched on and began to suckle.
The queen watched her son as he fed, her heart heavy. Already, her firstborn daughter was dead, never to open her eyes or scent the world around her. Would she lose her son as well? For the little kit was small, dangerously so. The queen feared he would never make it in the world. Her tail curled around her single kit, leaving the dead kit where it lay. She felt a sudden rush of pity for her surviving kit, and vowed to protect him, to make him feel loved, and to shelter him from the harsh, cold world.
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A small black cat, only about three moons old, mewled pitifully up at the large tabby looming over him. The tabby’s face was twisted in an expression of disgust and loathing. “This is no son of mine!” he declared. “He’s puny! He’ll never survive.” His green gaze whipped around to land on a petite black queen behind him. “It’s your fault, Ash!” His fury was directed towards her, for now.
Ash cowered down. “N-no…I did what I could…Please, Scorn, don’t be angry with him…Dawn was smaller…”
“And look what happened! Dead without taking a breath.” Scorn turned back to the kit in front of him. “He too will soon be dead. If you had been a little stronger, or taken better care of yourself, he would be bigger, and stronger, like me.” His gaze burned into the kit in front of him. “His name?” he asked Ash with a grimace.
“Shadow,” she replied quietly, her eyes also on her son, giving him a comforting glance. The little kit shivered, but shut his mouth, looking up at his father.
“That is not a fit enough name,” the tabby growled. “His name is Scourge. He shall be a scourge to all who cross his path…and a scourge to me as well.” His heavy muscles flexed as he turned around and stalked towards Ash. “You should have born me a stronger son.” She flinched.
“I didn’t have a choice,” she pleaded. Scorn wasn’t satisfied.
“It doesn’t matter. I’ve given you plenty of chances. First there was Daisy,” he spat the name out, “who turned out to be a puny little she-cat that died the first week. Then there was Dusk. He too died early. Then Dawn, who couldn’t even live one minute. Now Scourge.” His gaze turned into fire. “You have reached the end of my patience.”
Ash straightened defiantly. “Dusk died because of you, as did Daisy and Dawn. You knew Dusk wasn’t ready for any sort of training. His eyes were barely open! And if you had brought me freshkill, instead of forcing me to hunt for myself, perhaps Daisy and Dawn would still be alive!” There was pain and anger in the glare she shot at Scorn. “It is every bit your fault.”
“Enough!” spat Scorn. “Do not go placing blame where it is not warranted. A true mother can take care of herself and her kits. Obviously you didn’t care enough about them to take better care of yourself.” Ash hissed at him crossly, angering the huge tabby. He rose up, his claws unsheathed. With a yowl of pain, Ash fell beneath his paw. Scorn raised his paw again, ready to strike again.
However, the queen slithered away, her shoulder bleeding heavily. She was forced to limp backwards, her eyes wide with fear. “Scorn…” she whispered. “Please…” Her mate didn’t listen, and only leapt forward, fangs and claws extended once more. Ash yowled again, a cry that was cut off by a choking gurgle. Scorn stepped back, watching as blood poured out of the wound in Ash’s neck, his green gaze cold and uncaring. As Ash’s struggles grew weaker, he turned, walking off, ignoring the cries of the tiny kit, forgotten in the unfair battle.
Ash turned her dimming gaze towards her son. The kit tottered towards her on unsteady legs, his eyes confused and frightened. “Shadow…” Ash whispered. Her mouth opened, as if she was going to speak again, but instead a low gurgle sounded, and her eyes glazed over. She jerked once, and then lay still. The kit let out a mournful keen, his ice blue eyes grief-filled. Though he was young, he now knew of death, and of pain.
Shadow touched his tiny nose to his mother’s cooling fur, wanting to bury himself into her side and make it all go away. But she was dead, and nothing would bring her back. A scent wafted past his scent glands, and his head jerked up. His gaze swept towards the place where his father had gone, and a new emotion filled his eyes. Hatred, an emotion that few his age ever felt. Standing up on his tiny legs, the kit squared his shoulders. “My name is not Shadow,” he whispered in a small voice. “I am Scourge.” Scorn had spoken true. His son would one day become a scourge to all he met, once he grew older.
Placing his paws one in front of the other, Scourge began padding forward, his ears pricked, and his eyes intent, as he started following the scent of his father, hatred in his glare.
What caused Scourge to become so hate-filled?
What drove him to take control of Twolegplace?
Where did all his hatred and killing begin?
What drove him to take control of Twolegplace?
Where did all his hatred and killing begin?
Thus, I wrote this story, to be posted every so often in segments. Enjoy!))
Hatred
An agonized wail rang through the still night air. A slender black queen raised her head again, and let out another grief-stricken cry. Beside her lay two small bundles. One barely moved, while the other never had. The queen nosed her kits, her vision clouded with pain and sorrow, as she nudged the little she-kit. The dark tabby kit didn’t respond, her flanks not even rising or falling. The she-cat, finally giving up, turned to the other, a tom-kit, and black like her. His mouth opened in a pitiful hunger cry, and the queen’s eyes softened. She nudged the little kit to her belly, where he latched on and began to suckle.
The queen watched her son as he fed, her heart heavy. Already, her firstborn daughter was dead, never to open her eyes or scent the world around her. Would she lose her son as well? For the little kit was small, dangerously so. The queen feared he would never make it in the world. Her tail curled around her single kit, leaving the dead kit where it lay. She felt a sudden rush of pity for her surviving kit, and vowed to protect him, to make him feel loved, and to shelter him from the harsh, cold world.
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A small black cat, only about three moons old, mewled pitifully up at the large tabby looming over him. The tabby’s face was twisted in an expression of disgust and loathing. “This is no son of mine!” he declared. “He’s puny! He’ll never survive.” His green gaze whipped around to land on a petite black queen behind him. “It’s your fault, Ash!” His fury was directed towards her, for now.
Ash cowered down. “N-no…I did what I could…Please, Scorn, don’t be angry with him…Dawn was smaller…”
“And look what happened! Dead without taking a breath.” Scorn turned back to the kit in front of him. “He too will soon be dead. If you had been a little stronger, or taken better care of yourself, he would be bigger, and stronger, like me.” His gaze burned into the kit in front of him. “His name?” he asked Ash with a grimace.
“Shadow,” she replied quietly, her eyes also on her son, giving him a comforting glance. The little kit shivered, but shut his mouth, looking up at his father.
“That is not a fit enough name,” the tabby growled. “His name is Scourge. He shall be a scourge to all who cross his path…and a scourge to me as well.” His heavy muscles flexed as he turned around and stalked towards Ash. “You should have born me a stronger son.” She flinched.
“I didn’t have a choice,” she pleaded. Scorn wasn’t satisfied.
“It doesn’t matter. I’ve given you plenty of chances. First there was Daisy,” he spat the name out, “who turned out to be a puny little she-cat that died the first week. Then there was Dusk. He too died early. Then Dawn, who couldn’t even live one minute. Now Scourge.” His gaze turned into fire. “You have reached the end of my patience.”
Ash straightened defiantly. “Dusk died because of you, as did Daisy and Dawn. You knew Dusk wasn’t ready for any sort of training. His eyes were barely open! And if you had brought me freshkill, instead of forcing me to hunt for myself, perhaps Daisy and Dawn would still be alive!” There was pain and anger in the glare she shot at Scorn. “It is every bit your fault.”
“Enough!” spat Scorn. “Do not go placing blame where it is not warranted. A true mother can take care of herself and her kits. Obviously you didn’t care enough about them to take better care of yourself.” Ash hissed at him crossly, angering the huge tabby. He rose up, his claws unsheathed. With a yowl of pain, Ash fell beneath his paw. Scorn raised his paw again, ready to strike again.
However, the queen slithered away, her shoulder bleeding heavily. She was forced to limp backwards, her eyes wide with fear. “Scorn…” she whispered. “Please…” Her mate didn’t listen, and only leapt forward, fangs and claws extended once more. Ash yowled again, a cry that was cut off by a choking gurgle. Scorn stepped back, watching as blood poured out of the wound in Ash’s neck, his green gaze cold and uncaring. As Ash’s struggles grew weaker, he turned, walking off, ignoring the cries of the tiny kit, forgotten in the unfair battle.
Ash turned her dimming gaze towards her son. The kit tottered towards her on unsteady legs, his eyes confused and frightened. “Shadow…” Ash whispered. Her mouth opened, as if she was going to speak again, but instead a low gurgle sounded, and her eyes glazed over. She jerked once, and then lay still. The kit let out a mournful keen, his ice blue eyes grief-filled. Though he was young, he now knew of death, and of pain.
Shadow touched his tiny nose to his mother’s cooling fur, wanting to bury himself into her side and make it all go away. But she was dead, and nothing would bring her back. A scent wafted past his scent glands, and his head jerked up. His gaze swept towards the place where his father had gone, and a new emotion filled his eyes. Hatred, an emotion that few his age ever felt. Standing up on his tiny legs, the kit squared his shoulders. “My name is not Shadow,” he whispered in a small voice. “I am Scourge.” Scorn had spoken true. His son would one day become a scourge to all he met, once he grew older.
Placing his paws one in front of the other, Scourge began padding forward, his ears pricked, and his eyes intent, as he started following the scent of his father, hatred in his glare.