Heatherpaw :: RiverClan Apprentice :: F

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Name: Heatherpaw
Age: 11 moons
Gender: She-cat
Clan: RiverClan
Mentor: Snowfoot (Kitty)
Rank: Apprentice
Mate/Crush: None [Open]

Kin:

Description:

[/i] the mouse. Her moons of training as an apprentice has helped her to develop strong, streamlined muscles that allow her to swim skillfully. Indeed, she may look incredibly average, but this she-cat is one to watch out for.

Her pelt is an ashy gray color, which fades in and out of a more brown/gray hue over her back and reaches it’s darkest at the tip of her tail; she is also completely without stripes. Along the bridge of her snout is a swath of rich brown, which abruptly ends at her black-lined dark orange nose. Starting at her mouth and spreading to the farthest areas that could still be called her throat and chest is a pale, creamy white color that also appears on the underside of her hind legs. Heatherpaw’s eyes are large, round, and sit close together on her face. They’re a crisp, bright shade of blue that matches that of her mother’s eyes. The she-cat holds herself highly, with her back straight and her tail folded neatly over her paws in a polite and proud fashion. She seems like she could already be a warrior, the way she speaks in a smooth, confident, firm voice and hangs around with the older cats. One of the only indications of her rank is her lack of warrior suffix and the fact that she is usually seen attending to chores like bringing prey to the elders, cleaning out the nursery, or retrieving new bedding.[/ul]Personality:

History:

[/i] to want her. She went on like this for about a moon, when that mousebrained Boulderpaw decided her liked an apprentice his age instead. Heatherpaw was extremely disappointed and perhaps even a bit hurt, and returned to her belief that there really wasn’t anybody worth sticking by through thick and thin beside her sister. The apprentice worked, and she progressed quickly with her mentor. She gobbled up her training, and had little time for Rainpaw’s more social activities. A space grew between the sisters, and Heatherpaw found that her sister was leaving her to her own devices more and more. While they remained good friends and stayed on good terms, the larger sister missed how inseparable they used to be.

However, she wasn’t going to object. She would have to find some way to bring her and her sister back together. [/ul]
Roleplay example:

[/b] Heatherpaw began, turning to look over the three kits, ”What do you about pouncing?” Her voice lowered on the last word and her bright blue eyes narrowed, making the kits squeal with excitement. ”Show us, show us!” they prompted, enchanted by her show.

The apprentice flattened her ears and crouched so low that her belly touched the ground, chuckling as her audience mimicked her. In the blink of an eye she sprung, a blur of pale gray and brown as she sped through the lovely summer air. Suddenly she was still, her landing nearly silent. The kits sucked in their breath, frozen as their performer stayed motionless. ”Tah-dah!” Heatherpaw called as she turned to her audience, a bit of unlucky dandelion seed stuck to the bottom of her paw. Her inedible prey caught and shown, they kits all giggled and leapt onto each other, transforming into a wriggling ball of fur.

”Hey! Calm down, you’ll hurt yourself!”[/ul]
Other:

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[☆ Y e l l o w ☆]

This is a very well written bio with few mistakes, and a wonderful character as well! Heatherpaw is accepted, but as for her mentor... I'm sorry but I haven't been able to decide on one yet. ;; I'll let you know as soon as possible once a mentor for her is picked, but until then you're free to start roleplaying with her. Welcome to RiverClan!